Hits and Misses

Nick Last Name

English 1

Dr.Teacher

Hits and Misses

Hits:

1.      I think I put a good bit of my own personality in my papers to make them less average sounding.

2.      I have made improvements on grammar and tried using as little run on sentences as possible.

3.      Progressively over the year I have written on multiple ideas to keep a paper going.

Misses:

1.      Writing an obsessive amount of information on small things that don’t need to take up so much of a paper. Especially during the beginning of the year.

2.      The majority of my work is turned in late because I can’t make myself start doing work too easily.

3.      Inability to keep everything in the correct POV.

4.      Not being fully prepared for what I’m writing about or not having enough information to make a paper out of.